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Helios

Helios
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Basic info
Name: Helios
Age: 18
Birthday: 06/23/xxxx?
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Height: 5'7
Weight: 145
Face Claim:  Unknown OC from Pintrest, only source i could find.

Stats
STR: 4
DEF: 2
RES: 2
SPT: 4+1
Aura 180 |120 HP

Personality


Group: Researcher


Likes: Fire
Thrill of a challenge
Power


Dislikes: Cold areas
Rain
Weak people


Fears: Drowning
Loosing control
Loosing myself


Overall Personality: Helios is a rather calm individual, preferring to analysis every situation to its fullest before acting himself, this is counted when he is in a combat situation, as well as in social situations. This making it where he is not so talkative, and is less likely to start a conversation. However he is not shy by any means, if there is a conversation that interest him, or what he feels he could speak fluently and control the conversation once it starts. Despite not preferring to instigate a conversation with those around him however, he is still rather friendly if someone wishes to talk to him, however due to him wanting to gain as much information about those around him as much as possible to see who would be worth his time or not, or to see who might be a threat to him. The conversation will never be centered on himself, but rather on the other person, giving off the illusion that he cares about those around him, thus leading into the friendly act that he puts up in front of people. In combat however, or in a mission he is very calm, and very cold, preferring to finish the mission or the fight with using the bare minimum amount of his energy, while tricking those around him, or his fore to exert more.    

Abilities Helios due to his love of flame, and heat has grown in the power of fire, being able to full control in into both attacks, and to defend himself.  


Aura type: Spirit.


Aura Color: Bright reddish/Orange  


Semblance: Fire Manipulation. Can generate and control fire.


Item 1: Weapon: Āchā no tsūru (Archer's tool) This is a sword that has attachments, and gears built into the blade, to separate and to expand outward forming a bow with bladed ends. Once in its bow form the string is made solely from magic, thus making it where it couldn't break.  Tier 1 damage   Look: http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2014/330/5/8/rq__rwby_oc___tate_clover_by_diyaru4500-d87scmw.jpg

(Until the time and ranking for the weapon is right, it will be in it sword form without having the ability to change)


Item 2: Armor: A full body suit that can form over his body/clothing to protect, and to conceal his body, this armor is light weight which allows easy maneuverability, while still granting him the protect he needs from most psychical attacks.
Armor is immune to Helios' own fire.
Rating 1 Armor. defens https://i.servimg.com/u/f49/16/29/32/11/cyber_11.jpg

History and Sample
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Last edited by Helios on Sat May 16, 2015 6:46 pm; edited 4 times in total

2Helios Done Empty Re: Helios Done Thu May 14, 2015 1:51 pm

Lloyd Vanheim

Lloyd Vanheim
Hello. Lloyd's here for reviewing ^^


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What? I'm just a mod...

Okay, so they're some thing that will need reworking...

First off: your semblance. Although interesting, it isn't following the rules. You can't add Dust (or magical) damage to your physical. If you would want to imbue your weapon with fire, it's okay, but it would be for one shot and be considered a damage semblance with an added Burn status. It would cost 1 aura per True Damage up to 20.

Second: your weapon. Although the RWBY shows that all students have weapons having two forms, here at Syne we start with only one, allowing for some character development, so you will need to choose between the bow or the sword and upgrade your weapon to Rank 3 in order to add the other form.

Lastly: your armor. The armor itself is good, but the way you want to gain more defense with it can't be accepted. You could though use it to attack like you suggested, would work just as if you use your weapon.

The words counts are good and overall your character is great, but you need to change things... Bump when done and if you have questions, ask away. ^^

3Helios Done Empty Re: Helios Done Sat May 16, 2015 9:58 am

Helios

Helios
I edited my weapon and semblance :DD Although with my armor it would add more Defense to it, in the weapon/dust/armor rules it shows that a rating 1 defense gives you +10 armor against physical attacks.

4Helios Done Empty Re: Helios Done Sat May 16, 2015 5:09 pm

Lloyd Vanheim

Lloyd Vanheim
I'm glad you made the changes, but I would like some precision...

First, about your weapon, your first form is the sword one, correct? Because "bladed" doesn't really help as you'll kinda have a bladed bow later... Just change the term to sword if it's the case.

Second, about your armor, I know it gives defense, that's the whole point of having an armor, what I meant was about this: "The armor due to to touching Helios body can fully cover his body in flame without causing him harm, but will offer more defense"... You can't add ADDITIONAL defense with your semblance that way, still can use it to attack and all, not you won't gain more defense if you catch yourself on fire.

Also, if your FC has a name, plus the anime/manga or site his from, please add it as it would help for the FC List.

5Helios Done Empty Re: Helios Done Sat May 16, 2015 6:46 pm

Helios

Helios
Updated, should be all good now.

6Helios Done Empty Re: Helios Done Sat May 16, 2015 8:47 pm

Lloyd Vanheim

Lloyd Vanheim
Alright then, all seems to be in order...

Welcome officially to Syne my friend ^^

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