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Revan Winterstone

Revan Winterstone
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Basic info
Name: Revan Winterstone
Age: 22
Birthday: 8/26
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Height:5'7"
Weight: 124
Face Claim: Geis (Ys)

Stats
STR:5
DEF:5
SPT:1
RES:1
Aura 100|200 HP

Personality
Group: Teachers
Likes:
Tea
Strategy games (chess and the like)
Helping others
Learning
Joking
Dislikes:
Arrogance
Fighting with lethal intention (himself or others)
Students disrupting class
Sharing his past
Fears:
The death of those close to him (even more so by his own hands)
Drawing his sword around others
Dying alone
Overall Personality: Revan is a kind and friendly fellow, who prefers not to fight and tries to protect people as killing is a touchy subject do to his past. He would rarely even think of killing someone unless absolutely necessary, and will rarely even push himself to fight at full capacity. He likes teaching others to be calm, strategic and tactical in many situations and not just battle. Revan also likes to provide council for all things, if he is able, as he knows far too well the mental struggles people go through. However for unknown reasons whenever Revan's blade is fully drawn, everything changes. He becomes a bloodthirsty madman with the only intention of killing and destroying anything and everything in sight. At that point he likes to kill and will toy with his enemies or kill them as fast as possible depending on his mood. Not one person who has seen his blade fully drawn has ever survived to tell the tale.

Abilities
Aura type: Recovery
Aura Color: Blood red
Semblance: Teleportation: The user can teleport up to ten feet for every ten aura used, and only in increments of ten, so if Revan wanted to teleport 25 feet, he would use 30 aura. The user can also only teleport within line of sight, or places he knows well enough to vividly imagine without seeing.

Item 1: Revan wields a katana which is always held on his left hip. This blade cannot be drawn without  a secret which only Revan knows, and the blade has cryptic runes and symbols running all the way along either side which have never been deciphered. Due to the runes the blade infuses with a red lightning when drawn, adding an electric shock on contact.

Item 2: Black metal armor which acts as defense to Revan's arms and shoulders

History and Sample
History:

RP Sample:
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2Revan Winterstone (Finished) Empty Re: Revan Winterstone (Finished) Mon Aug 18, 2014 7:15 pm

Eliara Caithe

Eliara Caithe
Revan Winterstone (Finished) IbyLY2eSVixTkG

Admin Eli here to grade your app today!

This definitely is a top notch app and is suitable for a teacher position like you've requested. I enjoyed reading it a lot. You just have one small thing you need to fix and you'll be good to go.

1: All starting weapons just start with one weapon mode. Once you've put in the money to upgrade it you can get additional weapon modes. (Up to three) So you should pick between your staff and your stabby stabby sword. (I personally think it would be an interesting character growth idea to start with the sword first so that you have to deal with your bloodlust every time you have to use it. And hopefully train to overcome it. But that's just my two cents)

Bump when you have made the requested changes~

3Revan Winterstone (Finished) Empty Re: Revan Winterstone (Finished) Mon Aug 18, 2014 7:42 pm

Revan Winterstone

Revan Winterstone
Bump

4Revan Winterstone (Finished) Empty Re: Revan Winterstone (Finished) Mon Aug 18, 2014 8:32 pm

Eliara Caithe

Eliara Caithe
Revan Winterstone (Finished) Eli_ap13

You're good to go! Have fun RPing~!

Also your account name will be changed to Revan Winterstone, so remember that for next time you log in.

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