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1Ren [Finished] Empty Ren [Finished] Fri Jun 26, 2015 2:35 am

Ren Meio

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Basic info
Name: Ren
Age: 18
Birthday: August 8
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Height: 5' 8" (178 cm)
Weight: 50.9 kg (112.2 lbs)
Face Claim: Riku | Kingdom Hearts

Stats
STR: 4 (+1)
DEF: 4
RES: 2
SPT: 2
Aura 150|150 HP

Personality
Group: Gadgeteers
Likes:

  • Animals - All but insects
  • His Family.
  • Designing Weapons

Dislikes:

  • Prejudice People - Due to his past, he has grown a large hatred towards prejudice people.
  • Being Chained Down - He doesn't like constantly being told what to do, but he will obey certain rules that need to be obeyed, like the Academy rules, and some rules that his family made.
  • Talkative People - Due to his silent nature, and awkwardness, he hates people who will just come and chatter away to him, when he doesn't want to be talked to.

Fears:

  • Being Abandoned - Due to the constant moving from family to family, Ren doesn't want to be abandoned by his current family, since he has grown to like this family. He gained the fear of being abandoned from his third time of switching from one family, to an orphanage to his current family, when he arrived, he begged them not to abandoned him.
  • Coimetrophobia- Fear of cemeteries - He doesn't like cemeteries because of the death of his first adoptive mothers death.
  • Glossophobia- Fear of speaking in public or of trying to speak

Overall Personality: Ren is a quiet guy. He tends to stay silent around people he doesn't know, and is quite anti-social only socializing with certain people that he feels the need to. Ren is strong, but grows stronger when he needs to be at his strongest. Ren is accumulated to his studies, and wants to do his best in class, and when battling, he loves to train his skills so he can become even more stronger. He is an awkward child due to his past, and tends to want to keep out of the way, reason for Ren being awkward, and a quiet teen, was because of his history of being adopted into families, because they dubbed him as a "troublesome child" due to his quiet nature and only socializing when he needs to. Ren tended to get bullied due to his constant switching of families, and this developed him to be skilled in hand to hand combat as he defended himself, and his reason of hate towards prejudice people. The reason for his "troublesome" nature, is because of what happened to his first family, which caused him to become a silent teen.

His creative side came from the influence of his older brother in his latest family, since he was adopted into a family of craftsman, Ren became the one who designed the weapons and armor for the family, whilst his adoptive father and older brother crafted them. (237 words)

Abilities
Aura type: Power
Aura Color: Black
Semblance: Buff Semblance: Ren's semblance allows him to boosts his reflexes with a buff semblance in an agile way, so he reacts faster than usual. Though he can also use his semblance, to buff all his stats in strength, speed, spirit and defense. When his semblance is active, his whole body is cloaked in a faint black cloak, which surrounds his body to boosts his reflexes. Ren can also cover his weapon with his semblance, so his weapon is cloaked with the black aura, this can buff any dust attacks that Ren uses. He can't activate any more than one buff at a time.

Item 1: Weapon: Tamashī - Rating 1 | +10 Damage

Weapon:

Item 2: Armor: Kairo - Rating 1 | +10 Defense

Armor:

History and Sample
History (635 words) :

RP Sample (267 words) :



Last edited by Ren Meio on Sat Jun 27, 2015 5:49 pm; edited 1 time in total

2Ren [Finished] Empty Re: Ren [Finished] Fri Jun 26, 2015 11:19 pm

Ren Meio

Ren Meio
Bump

3Ren [Finished] Empty Re: Ren [Finished] Sat Jun 27, 2015 3:21 pm

Richard Lionheart

Richard Lionheart
Alright this is a great app ^^ Only a few minor problems. First is that you get 12 stat points and then the additional one from aura, so 13 total.

Second, could you put some more explanation into the semblance? As in how does it boost the stats, I get that bosting agility feasibly boosts str and maybe the cloak itself that forms is a strong material for res and def but I'm wondering about spt.

And finally, could you specify what kind of armour your armour is? Magical (dust resistant) or physical.

Just some minor fixes, bump when done Happy

4Ren [Finished] Empty Re: Ren [Finished] Sat Jun 27, 2015 5:49 pm

Ren Meio

Ren Meio
Bump~

5Ren [Finished] Empty Re: Ren [Finished] Sat Jun 27, 2015 5:53 pm

Richard Lionheart

Richard Lionheart
Approved

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