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Tess LaCoyle

Tess LaCoyle
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   Basic info
   Name: Tess LaColyle
   Age: 18
   Birthday: 15th day of the 6th month
   Gender: Female
   Race: Human
   Height: 5' 3" (1.6m)
   Weight: 110 lbs (49.8 kg)
   Face Claim: faceclaim image link (character is from a game, will research)
   Voice Claim: Sue Ulu (As Kei in Dirty Pair Flash, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4WmGrvf84o0 )

   Stats
   STR:4 (5)
   DEF:4
   RES:2
   SPT:2
   Aura 120|180 HP

   Personality
   Group: Warrior, Baby!
   Likes: Thunderstorms, rock and roll, fighting, hamburgers, being in motion, cream puffs (dessert)
   Dislikes: Bullies, cowards, Grimm, onions, coleslaw, books, studying, sitting still
   Fears: Failure, Math Tests, Water (shorts her Semblance and Aura powers)
   Overall Personality: Tess LaCoyle is the Oncoming Storm. She's positively charged and combat ready! All the time! In triplicate! In caps! She is energy personified, cheerful and gregarious, physically boisterous, and useless at most intellectual actions. She doodles in class when she should study, doodles when she should do homework, and is only alive in PE classes, the dueling ring and away from the dreary books. She’s always got a kind word for a friend, and you’re a friend (even if you are a nerd or bookworm) until you cross a clear line. Bully someone, cheat, lie blatantly, or order her around and see where it gets you. If you’re lucky, good, or tough, nowhere. If you aren’t, then probably the school infirmary.

   Abilities
   Aura type: Offensive!
   Aura Color: RED!
   Semblance: Negative Ions - Buff Semblance, increases STR by 2.
   Item 1: Shock and Awe, Dual Induction Revolver Tonfa (DIRT). These are a matching set with a locked melee function. She built them herself at her previous school But isn't finished with the more complex parts. Currently, they can be stored as a set of dark grey armbands around her biceps, and 'drawn' as if using dual shoulder holsters. To augment their regular cartridge usage, they have a socket inside the grip area that can hold crystal dust, each 'charging' of the weapons counts as a Dust use, and after five such uses, both the crystals crumble into useless sand. She currently lacks the skill to use Lightning Dust, so the socket is empty. She can also electrify the shots with her Aura, but this is much more fatiguing. Their alternate melee mode will transform them into electrified metal tonfa that fire a normal or Dust bullet when he hits someone.
   Item 2: Circuit Breaker - this simple talisman is a protective ward, giving her 1 Armor against Dust attacks. She wears it as a pair of cross-like earrings. When its protection is used, the damage is channeled to ground via her Aura in a visible electric arc that starts at the necklace. She can't use this arcing for offense, it's simply the safest way to bleed off the excess energy.
   History and Sample
   
History:
   
RP Sample:
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Last edited by Tess LaCoyle on Sun Mar 01, 2015 6:36 am; edited 5 times in total (Reason for editing : correcting coding and reducing powers)

Leena Lilac

Leena Lilac
Admin
First of all, your name. Gold star. Gold star to you.
Secondly, Before I really look at your app, some of your codes are broken, and I'll be nit picky here, but it's bothering me. Can you fix it?

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Tess LaCoyle

Tess LaCoyle
Leena Lilac wrote:First of all, your name. Gold star. Gold star to you.
Secondly, Before I really look at your app, some of your codes are broken, and I'll be nit picky here, but it's bothering me. Can you fix it?

I found a few glitches, not sure what might be buggy. Please let me know if there are still problems.

Thanks!

Leena Lilac

Leena Lilac
Admin
Ceck the bold code where you put your voice claim section

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Tess LaCoyle

Tess LaCoyle
Ok, found it and fixed.
Checked for other missing end tags too.
Hopefully that's better. :D

Leena Lilac

Leena Lilac
Admin
Not actually fixed, but I guess I can deal, haha.

Age: 16 is too young. Syne is basically in the age group of a college, and 16 would still be high school aged.

Face claim: while I can see it in your avatar, the image on your app isnt showing up.

Item 1: dust chaged bullets in and of itself is fine, but it means your second item has to be the dust charging them. You only get 2 items at start. If you wish to wait until you are able to buy the dust to charge it, i suggest having your weapon fire normal bullets, with the ability to be powered by dust if the resources are availible.

Dust: lightning is a T2 dust. A character is only allowed 5 posts worth of T1 dust, which would include the elements of Water, Fire, Earth, and Air.

Bump when done~

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Tess LaCoyle

Tess LaCoyle
Leena Lilac wrote:Not actually fixed, but I guess I can deal, ha ha.

Age: 16 is too young. Syne is basically in the age group of a college, and 16 would still be high school aged.

Face claim: while I can see it in your avatar, the image on your app isn't showing up.

Item 1: dust charged bullets in and of itself is fine, but it means your second item has to be the dust charging them. You only get 2 items at start. If you wish to wait until you are able to buy the dust to charge it, i suggest having your weapon fire normal bullets, with the ability to be powered by dust if the resources are available.

Dust: lightning is a T2 dust. A character is only allowed 5 posts worth of T1 dust, which would include the elements of Water, Fire, Earth, and Air.

Bump when done~

Ok, made the following changes.
Faceclaim - not sure what tie issue is, the image shows up in preview and forum on my end. Added a link to the image.
Age: Upped to 18
Item: Revolvers now modified to use 'normal' ammo, can accept dust, but have none in them - still optimized for lightning dust.
Item 2: Rank 1 Armor item retained, +1 vs Dust-based attacks.
Item 3: "Red Lightning" Dust. Deleted due to inappropriate level and lack of item slots.

Stats. Shifted points a little, Physical stats both at 4, because I expect her fights will now take a little longer and she'll need better defenses.

Questions: Can my revolver attacks be enhanced using Aura? Do I require Dust to do so? Can this still give an electricity component if that's the nature of my Offensive Aura?

(Whining, optional reading :D )
The loss of lightning dust dramatically reduces her combat capabilities. She will do far less damage per attack. I do understand that she had one item too many, so something had to go, and it was the item of incorrect level. On the plus side, she now has a personal goal. Get zap lightning dust! :)

Leena Lilac

Leena Lilac
Admin
Yes, you can enhance weapons with your semblance. No, that does not require dust. Yes, because your semblance is electric, if you enhance a weapon it has those electric properties.

You did not lose that much in the way of dealing damage, really. I do my best to have everyone start out at somewhat the same powerlevel at start, with, of course, the exception if the stats, which allows one to configure their playstyle.

In any case, I see no further issues. Approved!

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Leena Lilac

Leena Lilac
Admin
Moved to fix numbers, bump when done

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Tess LaCoyle

Tess LaCoyle
OK, fixed a few more errors. Things should work now.

Leena Lilac

Leena Lilac
Admin
Re-approved

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