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1Zacharias Grey Empty Zacharias Grey Mon Apr 10, 2017 5:53 pm

Zacharias Grey

Zacharias Grey
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Basic info
Name: Zacharias Grey
Age: 17
Birthday: 9/24
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Height: 6'2"
Weight: 215 lb.
Face Claim: Ledo Gargantia

Stats
STR:4
DEF:3
RES:3
SPT:2
Aura 150|150 HP

Personality
Major: Combat
Likes: Humor, Fights, and Talks with friends
Dislikes: Large Groups, Boredom, and Failure
Fears: Inability to save friends, Becoming a Monster, and confined spaces.
Talent: Fighting
Weakness Fine Art
Overall Personality: Zacharias is not to be around large crowds he has a tendency to avoid them. He is usually seen as a silent but good friend. The only times he is heard speaking is in conversations with friends and when its absolutely necessary. Due to his lack of social interaction Zacharias tends to get awkward when meeting new people.

Even though his is silent and calm in peaceful situations he is quite energetic in battle. Though he tries to hide this side of himself he loves the rush of adrenaline. This causes his calm relaxed state fearing that he will get himself into trouble.

Zacharias views things from the perspective of duty. He tends to put his objective first unless convinced by his friends to do otherwise. He will also become protective of friends attempting to stop them from doing things he thinks are "stupid". Zacharias has a tendency to "look around" during conversations, observing his surroundings making occasional eye contact.

Abilities
Aura type: Recovery
Aura Color: Greyish-White
Semblance: Wolf's Bite: Zacharias is able to channel his aura to enhance his strikes. If he is holding an object his aura will extend to the object allowing it to strike with greater impact. If the object is to be thrown, it will leave the aura reach but launch at a higher velocity.
Item 1: Staff, A metal staff with some intricate designs.
Item 2: Chest plate (with gauntlets and greaves) the standard armor that Zacharias wears. It is a grey-ish metal with some dents and scratch marks. It protects from physical attacks.

History and Sample
History:
RP Sample:



Last edited by cursedchriscrm on Tue Apr 11, 2017 9:36 pm; edited 2 times in total

2Zacharias Grey Empty Re: Zacharias Grey Mon Apr 10, 2017 7:34 pm

Richard Lionheart

Richard Lionheart
Hey welcome to the site ^^ Alright, the app is pretty good but there are a couple minor problems. The first is that your weapon as it currently is has multiple forms, here those are earned over time and as you go up the tiers with training. To start with though it would have to be a single long pole, the two batons or the blades. You can however have a form for storage atop your base form.

Second isn't as much of a deal, when it comes to your semblance and the way you've described it it seems as though by channeling your aura to your fists you can harden the aura around them to improve str. I would recommend wording it this far or further ^^ you could additionally, atop channeling it to your hands, channel it from their to coat your weapon and give yourself an str buff on your armed attacks as well. Bump when done

3Zacharias Grey Empty Re: Zacharias Grey Tue Apr 11, 2017 7:31 pm

Zacharias Grey

Zacharias Grey
Bump...

4Zacharias Grey Empty Re: Zacharias Grey Tue Apr 11, 2017 7:38 pm

Richard Lionheart

Richard Lionheart
Ahh I forgot one thing, my bad ^^ you need to specify your amour type on the chest plate. Physical or dust resistant. Bump when done

5Zacharias Grey Empty Re: Zacharias Grey Tue Apr 11, 2017 9:37 pm

Zacharias Grey

Zacharias Grey
Bump

6Zacharias Grey Empty Re: Zacharias Grey Wed Apr 12, 2017 9:32 am

Richard Lionheart

Richard Lionheart
Approved

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