You are not connected. Please login or register

Iris Sterling

View previous topic View next topic Go down  Message [Page 1 of 1]

1Iris Sterling Empty Iris Sterling Mon Jun 04, 2018 1:26 pm

Iris Sterling

Iris Sterling
Enrollment Form


Basic info
Name: Iris Victoria Sterling
Age: 18
Birthday: December 9th
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Height:5'8
Weight:150 lbs
Face Claim:Iris Sterling IzDWltx

Stats
STR:2
DEF:4
RES:4
SPT:2
Aura 120|180 HP

Personality
Major: Undecided
Likes: Art, Metal engraving, nature
Dislikes: loud noises, crowds, "get-to-know-you" activities, bullies
Fears: being stuck in a crowd or area with lots of people, public speaking, nightmares
Talent: Fine art
Weakness Social Interaction/Speech/Charisma
Overall Personality: Iris is quiet, but when she speaks, she means what she says, and there is often more to her words than one would first notice. She isn't the most popular person out there by any means, in fact, most people see her as strange and tend to avoid her. Iris has difficulty expressing herself to others, because her mind is often running faster than she can keep up with, and when she does try to explain herself, others can rarely understand her. She likes art and drawing because it helps her to slow down and put her emotions and concerns onto paper. She even draws sometimes to convey everyday conversation, which has led to some people thinking her to be mute (even though she isn't). Iris also is innately very perceptive, which is another reason why people avoid her. To them, she almost seems like a mind reader or psychic, but really she's just good at reading people and their emotions, even if she may have trouble voicing her thoughts in ways that make sense to most people.

Abilities
Aura type: Defense
Aura Color: wisteria purple
Semblance: Name:Mirror Description: Iris can create  and move flat planes of a clear, glass-like substance. These planes can reflect back whatever attack or force is exerted on it, but only on one side/direction. A plane breaks after the total force (combined attacks/hit points done to it)exerted on it is higher than what it can handle. The size and durability of the plane affects aura cost (more durable/higher size = costs more aura) These planes are good for deflecting attacks, but also are useful in redirecting projectiles back at the enemy. In other situations, Iris uses them to "shove" herself or allies out of the way faster. If a plane has lower hit points than the force being put on it, it will reflect that one object first, and then break/shatter
(it can do semblance defence for 20 aura, grating 20 defence, and spend an additional 20 aura for 20 damage to send the projectile back as semblance damage. She would be hurt by damage that exceeds that initial 20. Using it to push would be a 10 aura utility cost.)

Item 1: Weapon: Krystallumn, Description: Krystallumn can function as a regular mace, but it also has a button which allows the top spike ball head to shoot out while attached to a chain (maximum chain length= 15 feet) The spikeball and chain can be infused with dust. Krystallumn is good with dealing blunt force damage or knocking down heavy/armored grimm
Item 2: Armor: Iris wears a full suit of plate armor (physical armor) and also wields a shield.

History and Sample
History:
RP Sample:



Last edited by Iris Sterling on Mon Jun 11, 2018 7:33 pm; edited 4 times in total

2Iris Sterling Empty Re: Iris Sterling Mon Jun 04, 2018 1:48 pm

Richard Lionheart

Richard Lionheart
Hey ^^ This is a good app but there are a couple of things that need fixed and, as I told you in chat, a couple that'll need to be discussed by the staff. What needs fixed is the image, you would need to put the placeholder itself in here; as you plan to do your own depiction of the art we can ignore the need for the changing item. Second is that you have a dislike and fear of crowds, you would need to add one more dislike or fear as you must have three unique ones in each category. Also you have not met the 300 word count for history or the 150 word count requirement for rp sample ^^ And you need to specify armour type.

As for what needs discussed among staff, your semblance has some issues that may need talked about; how I think it would work on a meta side is you can do semblance defence for 20 aura, grating 20 defence, and spend an additional 20 aura for 20 damage to send the projectile back as semblance damage. You would be hurt by damage that exceeds that initial 20. Using it to push would be a 10 aura utility cost. This is as I currently understand it at least. Second we'll need to talk about whether a suit and a shield can be taken as one piece of armour. Do not worry as you could take the shield and wear armour, only to grant it boosts later as dust resistant ^^

3Iris Sterling Empty Re: Iris Sterling Sun Jun 10, 2018 5:07 pm

Richard Lionheart

Richard Lionheart
I can now confirm that your weapon and armour is fine, but you do need to specify that your semblance works as I have described ^^ You also haven't specified a unit on your weight, bump when done.

4Iris Sterling Empty Re: Iris Sterling Mon Jun 11, 2018 7:40 pm

Iris Sterling

Iris Sterling
Done :)

5Iris Sterling Empty Re: Iris Sterling Tue Jun 12, 2018 2:38 pm

Richard Lionheart

Richard Lionheart
Approved!

Sponsored content


View previous topic View next topic Back to top  Message [Page 1 of 1]

Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum