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1Oliver Balcross Empty Oliver Balcross Thu Aug 14, 2014 5:11 am

Oliver Balcross

Oliver Balcross
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Basic info
Name: Oliver Balcross
Age: 19
Birthday: October 27
Gender: Male
Race: Faunus. (Bear)
Height: 5"9
Weight: 136
Face Claim: Base image of Kirito from SAO. Self Drawn avatar.

Stats
STR: 4
AGT: 3
SPD: 3
SPT: 2
Aura 170|130 HP

Personality
Group: Warrior
Likes: Peanut Butter, Salmon, Olives and Dust
Dislikes: Grimm, Kiwi and Anti-Faunus Humans
Fears: Death, Losing those close to him and the New White Fang.
Overall Personality: Oliver is a rather cheery fellow at times but when his life or friends are on the line. He’ll step to almost any challenge. He prefers to think of himself as a big brother to his friends. Always willing to help them out if they’re in a jam. He however has a philosophical side to his personality. Often giving helpful tips on certain sticky situations. However Oliver seems to have a slight addiction to salmon due to his Faunus heritage. At the slightest scent of salmon he’s awake. Instantly. As a downside of this Oliver gets VERY angry when people taunt him with salmon.

Abilities
Aura type: Defense
Aura Color: Olive Green
Semblance: Psychokinesis. More specifically the movement of inanimate objects. He cannot move people. Or Grimm.
Item 1: Malevolent Wyvern. Oliver's weapon of choice. It's a buzz saw on the end of an axe handle. (Is the best way to describe it)
Item 2: T1 Fire Dust.

History and Sample
History:
RP Sample:



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2Oliver Balcross Empty Re: Oliver Balcross Sat Aug 16, 2014 6:17 pm

Eliara Caithe

Eliara Caithe
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Admin Eli here to look over your app! Nice to meetcha!

ALRIGHT so you just have two problems with your app that need to be fixed and you'll be good to go.

1: For dust as an item you need to pick a basic element. (Fire, Ice, Earth, or wind). You don't have to worry about Malefic Wyvern, you don't have to devote the second item as a power source, it will come with whatever power source/ammo you need for it as part of the weapon itself.

2: In your history you have two small spelling errors. There's the mythical "alot" beast and "alongside" is misspelled. I know I'm a grammar nazi but I can't help myself. Gomenasai~


Just get those two fixed up and you'll be all set.

3Oliver Balcross Empty Re: Oliver Balcross Sat Aug 16, 2014 7:16 pm

Oliver Balcross

Oliver Balcross
Should have fixed everything. I will admit got a little confused on the Dust thing. So I put Fire dust under the assumption it's red. Hope... That's not a misjudgement... :P

4Oliver Balcross Empty Re: Oliver Balcross Sat Aug 16, 2014 8:00 pm

Eliara Caithe

Eliara Caithe
Your dust doesn't HAVE to be fire based on it's color if you don't want it to be. It could be a red wind dust for all it matters.

So if you want it to be red fire dust, great! If you want it to be a different element but still be red, great! It's all up to you.

5Oliver Balcross Empty Re: Oliver Balcross Sat Aug 16, 2014 8:12 pm

Oliver Balcross

Oliver Balcross
Fire seems fine for me. (Flaming saw blades :D)


Also. A quick question. How does the Scroll thing on the profile work? (Trying to get the aura thing to match up...)

6Oliver Balcross Empty Re: Oliver Balcross Sat Aug 16, 2014 8:30 pm

Eliara Caithe

Eliara Caithe
Oliver Balcross Eli_ap11

I modified your scroll for ya. You are good to RP unless Leena Bosslady yells at me for something I missed after she gets back from her convention. ^.^

7Oliver Balcross Empty Re: Oliver Balcross Sat Aug 16, 2014 8:32 pm

Eliara Caithe

Eliara Caithe
Also I'm changing your account name to Oliver Balcross, so remember that when you're logging in.

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