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Wendy Gradientia (Finished  ready for approval) Wendy-wendy-marvell-32320023-670-800


Basic info
Name: Wendy Gradienta
Age: 19
Birthday: December 26
Gender: Female
Race: Faunas Cougar (blue gray ears)
Height: 4'4
Weight: 83 lbs
Face Claim: Wendy Marvell

Stats
STR:4
DEF:1
RES:2
SPT:5
Aura200 |HP 100

Personality
Major: Citizen Likes: Quiet,Wind,anything sweet,killing grimm
Dislikes: Loud places, Cold, Anything sour, Heat
Fears: Death, Pickled plums, Losing anything else,
Talent: Wilderness survival
Weakness Speech
Overall Personality: Wendy is a Very quiet person and simply prefers not to talk to anything or anyone however she still is capable of speech. Part of her left ear is also torn off. Wendy is a very eerie woman, while being 18 she is one of the smallest people you'll ever meet standing only at 4'4. Wendy can get very angry at comments like squirt or Doll,but due to not liking to express herself she usually levels the Commentor with an eerie stare. She is very introverted and perfers to be by herself in nearly all endeavors. She has no qualms on killing and has a taste for killing Grimm. However at times she can be very considerate and caring, especially toward those she cares about. She has claw marks on her throat, and blue eyes.

Abilities
Aura type: Recovery
Aura Color: Blue green
Semblance: Aero-Kinesis: Wendy has the ability to manipulate air in any form. From a cool breeze to small tornadoes. Wind she manipulates glows a  bright blueish green.

Item 1:Venus Hectate- Mark 1- A powerful sniper rifle that has a powerful compressing mechanism inside it,that fires compressed air at such a velocity that it can shatter stone. It also comes equipped with an Eye piece.
Item 2: Tier one wind dust- Wendy carries wind dust in the form of small chewable mints,that let her breath wind dust at her foes.

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Last edited by Wendy Gradient on Wed Mar 29, 2017 11:40 pm; edited 2 times in total

Akui

Akui
Hey there Wendy! Name's Akui, and I'm your app grader this time around. Everything looks good for the most part, but after discussion in the mod chat it would seem that there needs to be one minor change.

Air Manipulation isn't banned by any means, however it has a big advantage over fire or ice in the sense that...well, you can't really see it. Since you can't really see air, we can't have the air you manipulate also not be seen. A quick fix is that when you do manipulate air, you can have the air you are manipulating have the same color as your aura, however you can choose how you want to change that.

With just that small change, you'll be good to blow! ;)

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Wendy Gradient

Wendy Gradient
Bump^^

Akui

Akui
Perfect, just wanted to note that the Wind Dust in chewables is an awesome idea, I hope you have fun with it! :D

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Akui

Akui
Moved back for edits, as per requested.

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Wendy Gradient

Wendy Gradient
Finished Changes I wanted to make, Bump^

Akui

Akui
Re-Approved!

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