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Dex

Dex
Dylan "Dex" Spurling, reference in a bag! (Finished and ready to approve!) Kale

Basic info
Name: Dylan "Dex" Spurling
Age: 19
Birthday: 6/10
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Height: 5'10"
Weight: 156 lbs
Face Claim:   https://media.photobucket.com/user/VioletZoeySmith1/media/Kovo%20and%20His%20Homies/Kovo/Kale.jpg.html?
Stats
STR:4
DEF:3
RES:2
SPT:2
Aura 130|180 HP

Personality
Major: Dust (Specialized Hunter)
Likes: Video games, Hunting, otherwise being a couch potato
Dislikes: Idiots, Faunus that dislike humans, Overworking, Scary things, His friends getting hurt
Fears: Death, Heights, Horror Movies, being outnumbered by Grimm
Talent: Fighting
Weakness: Organization
Overall Personality: Dylan is generally cheerful and relaxed, but he has a short fuse that he thankfully keeps under control. most of the time. He is annoyed with Faunus that still have a thing against humans, as he sees it as pointless. On the same beat, he seems to be even more intolerant to humans that discriminate against Faunus, as he sees them as the cause of all of this tension. He can be described as lazy, almost to the point of not moving at some points, but he has a strange enjoyment of punching things. He is a generally messy individual, and is horrible with organization to the point to where his room is magically so disorganized it is organized in its own weird way. He is in his own words "Idiot intolerant," and dislikes working with people that seem to have a sizable difference in intelligence to his own, as he hates repeating himself.

Abilities
Aura type: Speed
Aura Color: Dark red
Semblance: Utility: "Cancel". Allows him to greatly speed himself up very briefly, bringing him to a completely different position to launch a different attack or escape a situation.
Item 1: Weapon: STND-01 MIDAS: His backpack can store Dust among other supplies, as well as turn into the STND-01 MIDAS. It is a large, muscular humanoid upper body that works like another pair of hands to punch people with. STND-01 can also use Lightining Dust, and Explosion Dust.
Item 2: Physical Armor: Phase Shield: a shield that can spread all around the body for light armor, or manifest into a condensed circle on the arm for combat and a more heavy shield. It can be electrically charged by STND-01 MIDAS.

History:

RP Example:



Last edited by Akui on Wed Mar 29, 2017 2:32 am; edited 4 times in total (Reason for editing : Heck if I can write 300 words..... But everything else should be Gouda cheese!)

Akui

Akui
Hey there Dex! Name's Akui, and I'll be your moderator today.

Seems we got a few issues to resolve here before this app is completely ready, though automatic kudos for the Goku Black FC...which is the first issue.

Not only do we need your picture at the top and centered, but the link to is needs to be provided in the FC section that you currently have as 'N/A.' We do this so that you don't have someone else's face, and no one can take yours.

In all three sections that require a Word Count (Personality=100, History=300, RP Sample=150) you are short of the accepted amount. It may take a bit of time, but trust me, backstory is worth it. ;)

As long as your semblance is supposed to be a Flash Step, that is perfectly fine. If I'm reading that wrong, let me know, as it may need changes.

The backpack is cool, but the shield...well, it's not really an issues per say, just keep these two things in mind: you won't get the armor buff if you are unable to block the attack with it, and hitting someone with your shield will count as an unarmed attack, and thereby won't receive a weapon buff.

The shield isn't specified to be Physical Armor. I'm sure it is, but that needs to be specified. Also, your backpack needs to be described as 'able to carry Dust', because you can only have two items when you start.

Once these changes are made/clarified/agreed upon, I see no issues with your app.

http://www.discordapp.com/#5424

Dex

Dex
Thanks for the help.
Just 2 things.
Yeah, "Cancel" is pretty much a Flash Step,
And the Goku Black profile pic is basically a placeholder while I think of someone else that is not Goku Black.
Thanks for the help, and I'll make those changes as soon as I can, if not now.

Akui

Akui
Ah man, no more Goku Black...;(

Oh well, everything checks out!

So, in other words...

Dylan "Dex" Spurling, reference in a bag! (Finished and ready to approve!) Ze92C2K
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http://www.discordapp.com/#5424

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