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1Gary Silver[Waiting For Approval] Empty Gary Silver[Waiting For Approval] Sat Jan 28, 2017 1:17 am

DragonFaunus

DragonFaunus
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Gary Silver[Waiting For Approval] Rwby_x12
Basic Info
Name:Gary Silver
Age:17
Birthday:January 25
Race:Human
Height:6'7"
Weight:180
Face Claim:Garret Strider
Stats
Str: 3
Def: 3
Res: 2
Spt: 4
Aura:100|200HP

Personality
Major:Dust
Likes:Swords, explosions, and fighting
Dislikes:Death, Grimm, White Fang
Fears:Water, Darkness, Small Spaces
Talent:Fighting
Weakness:Stealth
Overall Personality:Gary can be stubborn sometimes. He usually runs in head first into everything without thinking. He may seem tough but really he is claustrophobic. He can be very overprotective sometimes. When he is angry he is known to go on a rampage, killing every grimm he encounters. When he calms down, he usually shuts down and takes a rest. He is very skilled but sometimes gets too crazy. Whenever Gary shuts down he can even avoid missions while he rests. He can be reckless at times but overall he is very nice. He never backs down from a challenge and even takes on the biggest of missions.
Abilities
Aura Type:Recovery
Aura Color:Gray
Semblance:Rage Burst, When Gary gets really angry he becomes stronger. He buffs up in strength and can destroy someone in minutes.
Item 1:Eclipse and Solstice: A Broadsword
Item 2:Silver Breastplate:Physical Armor
History and Sample
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Last edited by DragonFaunus on Mon May 22, 2017 6:54 pm; edited 3 times in total

2Gary Silver[Waiting For Approval] Empty Re: Gary Silver[Waiting For Approval] Sun Feb 05, 2017 5:24 am

Richard Lionheart

Richard Lionheart
Hey, ^^ Sorry for the delay, but there are a couple emblems with the app before it can be approved. First of all, while you've described tying your semblance to your anger you haven't described what the semblance actually does when you do put yourself into this angered state. This can be as simple as by triggering this angered state your aura turns to adrenaline giving you an increase in physical attack power or in speed (as only one stat can be buffed at a time) Bump when done

3Gary Silver[Waiting For Approval] Empty Re: Gary Silver[Waiting For Approval] Sat May 20, 2017 5:19 pm

DragonFaunus

DragonFaunus
fixed and bump.

4Gary Silver[Waiting For Approval] Empty Re: Gary Silver[Waiting For Approval] Sat May 20, 2017 9:21 pm

Richard Lionheart

Richard Lionheart
I couldn't see due to the colour, but you also have 60 more hp/aura points than you're meant to have. Also is your armour physical or magical based, I assumed physical but to be sure ^^ bump when done

5Gary Silver[Waiting For Approval] Empty Re: Gary Silver[Waiting For Approval] Mon May 22, 2017 6:58 pm

DragonFaunus

DragonFaunus
All fixed. Is there anything else?

6Gary Silver[Waiting For Approval] Empty Re: Gary Silver[Waiting For Approval] Tue May 23, 2017 4:24 pm

Richard Lionheart

Richard Lionheart
nope, approved

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