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1Roy Fox (Finished) Empty Roy Fox (Finished) Wed Dec 28, 2016 5:40 am

Roy Fox

Roy Fox
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Basic info
Name: Roy fox 
Age: 18
Birthday: 7/18
Gender: male
Race: human
Height: 5'11
Weight: 137 lbs
Face Claim: Toma- Amnesia

Stats
STR:3
DEF:2
RES: 5
SPT:2
Aura 150|150 HP 

Personality
Major:Combat
Likes: the color orange, 
Puns
Sleep
Trenchcoats
Dislikes:the color pink
People who mistake him for a Faunas(due to his last name) 
Morning
Hair brushes.
Fears: Death
Loss of friends
Being helpless
Overall Personality: Roy Fox Is what you would call a free spirit, he is always got a smile on his face and is often thought of as lazy. He is also a very sarcastic individual making jokes left and right and taunting his opponents even in the heat of battle. However under that mask of sarcasm and laziness is a young man who is very protective of those he cares about to the point of even being considered suicidal. He is easily annoyed and often accidentally thought to be a faunas(due to his last name and hair), overall he is a very laid back and sarcastic individual who careers deeply about his friends. 

Skillful at: Cooking
Lacking skills in: Tactics

Abilities
Aura type: Spirit
Aura Color: Orange
Semblance: Static- Accelerates the rate and amount of static electricity that  is created through friction .this can be used for a multitude of purposes such as wiping electronics or even acting as a makeshift defibrillator.
Item 1: Katana- a long Japanese sword whose sheath has a flame design embroiled on it. 
Item 2: Dust resistant Trenchcoat- A trenchcoat that provides moderate dust protection but little to no physical protection.
History and Sample
History:


RP Sample:



Last edited by Roy Fox on Sat Dec 31, 2016 1:32 am; edited 1 time in total

2Roy Fox (Finished) Empty Re: Roy Fox (Finished) Wed Dec 28, 2016 9:03 am

Richard Lionheart

Richard Lionheart
Hey, welcome to the site. This is a great app but there are a couple probelms ^^ The first is that you have 12 stat points, not counting the additional 1 granted by your aura type. Your current total is only nine.

Next is that, while you can make your coat "dust resistant" or "physical resistant" you can't have a coat that reduces damage from just flanes, nor any single element.

The final thing is that you do not make the word count on your history, please increase this to at least 300. Bump when done, you're almost there ^^

3Roy Fox (Finished) Empty Re: Roy Fox (Finished) Sat Dec 31, 2016 1:33 am

Roy Fox

Roy Fox
Bump

4Roy Fox (Finished) Empty Re: Roy Fox (Finished) Sat Dec 31, 2016 7:16 am

Richard Lionheart

Richard Lionheart
Approved ^^

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