You are not connected. Please login or register

The Valiant Gallahad Argent has joined the fight!

View previous topic View next topic Go down  Message [Page 1 of 1]

Paragon

Paragon
Enrollment Form



Basic info
Name: Gallahad Argent
Age: 28
Birthday: 7/7
Gender: Male
Race: Komodo Faunus, reptilian scales and tail (claims to be descended from dragons)
Height: 7'
Weight: 300lbs
Face Claim: http://orig08.deviantart.net/b997/f/2013/150/5/9/dragon_born_by_atomiccircus-d674vjo.jpg

The Valiant Gallahad Argent  has joined the fight! Dragon_born_by_atomiccircus-d674vjo

Stats
STR:5
DEF: 4
RES: 2
SPT:1
Aura 100|200 HP

Personality
Major: combat
Likes: Honorable combat, training, religious study, acts of valor, respectful people, chivalrous actions, polishing his arms and armor
Dislikes: cowards, bullies, acts of cruelty,  dishonorable actions and people, irreverence, heresy, being unnecessarily dirty
Fears: failure,  bringing dishonor on himself, being thought of as impious, his draconian heritage consuming him
Overall Personality: Gallahad is a model to all who want to be knights, pious, chivalrous, strong.  As the youngest of 15 sons and 20 daughters, he has long since learned to let personal insult pass...As long as it is not aimed at his honor. He will let anyone beat on him as he knows he can hurt others badly but if he sees someone In need he will not hesitate to put the aggressor down hard. As a dragon faunus, he has a naturally high resistance to physical attack and his religious studies have granted a bit of dust resistance. His greatest fears involve being thought of as impious or unknightly by others, particularly women. He is, unfortunately, a bit arrogant as he is the best of the acolytes from his temple and the monks sent him to Syne to cross train and hopefully be less of a jerk.

Abilities
Aura type: Healing
Aura Color: silver
Semblance: Bahamut's Justice: Gallahad imbues his weapon with a holy fire that burns with righteous anger. It can cause a burn effect and does up to 20 damage. It can be launched with a range of 10 meters. He can also breath it out in a five meter cone if he must.
Item 1: Divine Wrath: Gallahad has a Jiu Huan Dao that was forged for him by blacksmith monks who believe that the best way to worship their god is to kill creatures of grimm. The nine rings represent the nine directions of the moral compass and channel the Aura for Bahamut's Justice, the haft collapses to the length of a two handed sword hilt for easier storage and also for fighting in smaller spaces
Item 2: Guardian Angel: Gallahad wears plate armor that blocks all but the strongest of attacks. Useless against dust based attack. Tier 1 armor

History and Sample

History:

RP Sample:



Last edited by Paragon on Sun Sep 04, 2016 1:57 pm; edited 5 times in total

Richard Lionheart

Richard Lionheart
hey welcome to the site ^^

First thing is your picture is kinda gigantic. If you have the URL you can edit down the height and width of the image to make it easier to see.

Second is that we do not currently allow dragon faunus or faunus of animals that don't exist naturally, however you can be a reptile faunus who's family claims to be descended of dragons or the like to that. Perhaps even incorporating your fire semblance as one passed on through your family so as to bring more president to that rumor. You must also specify your faunus traits, I'm assuing it's the skin but I can't quite tell through the armour.

Third is that your item two, the armour, doesn't quite work like that. It would be "Tier one Physical Armour" which provides ten more defense against physical attacks, however 10 defense =/= 10 def. It is the equivalent of two def currently as during damage calculations all stats are multiplied by five and all equipment by ten times their level. Just put that it is "Tier one Physical Armour" rather than the def stuff and you're good

Finally your history does not meet the 300 word requirement ^^ bump when done

Paragon

Paragon
Bump

Richard Lionheart

Richard Lionheart
You're still 34 words off the history requirement, bunp when done ^^

Paragon

Paragon
Bump

Richard Lionheart

Richard Lionheart
Approved

Sponsored content


View previous topic View next topic Back to top  Message [Page 1 of 1]

Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum