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1Kozai Halcarax  Empty Kozai Halcarax Fri May 13, 2016 4:44 pm

Kozai

Kozai
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Basic info
Name: Kozai Halcarax
Age: 17
Birthday: March 10
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Height: 5'8"
Weight: 146 lbs
Face Claim:Accelerator (Toaru Majutsu no Index)

Stats
STR:3
DEF:4
RES:3
SPT:2
Aura 160|140 HP

Personality
Major:Tech
Likes:
- Maiming people
- Cooking
- Playing Chess
Dislikes:
- Failure
- Using his knife before he's won a fight
- People who die too quickly
Fears:
- Tigers
- Deep water
- Burning oil
Overall Personality:  Kozai's kind of cold at first. He normally doesn't really try to interact with other people, since he tends to find out that he hurts people rather than help them, whatever he tries to do. This is probably because Kozai is inherently selfish. Among human beings, his worldview is an extremely cynical one. He refuses to believe that any person is capable (much lest interested) in his own goals and aspirations. Speaking of those, Kozai is someone fully dedicated to his research, that being using dust to create what he calls "array formations", as well as better combat techniques using his semblance. In such a way, Kozai can be considered a "combat cultivator" of old.

Abilities
Aura type: Recovery
Aura Color: Green
Semblance: Multiplicity: The user can fold portions of space, allowing for teleportation. This, of course, is restricted. When touching to teleport another target, the range is EXTREMELY small, being about 5 meters. If done with another person, the user must teleport with the target. However, when teleporting himself along with his clothes/gear, the range extends slightly to about 10 meters. Must have line of sight with teleportation destination.

Item 1: Weapon: Sword (knife). A dark-green metal double-edged long knife, suited for assassinations and mutilation. 45 cm long.
Item 2: Dust: Tier one wind.

History and Sample
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RP Sample:



Last edited by Kozai on Fri May 20, 2016 6:03 pm; edited 3 times in total

2Kozai Halcarax  Empty Re: Kozai Halcarax Tue May 17, 2016 8:35 pm

Kozai

Kozai
Finished.

3Kozai Halcarax  Empty Re: Kozai Halcarax Thu May 19, 2016 11:21 am

Kozai

Kozai
Bump.

4Kozai Halcarax  Empty Re: Kozai Halcarax Thu May 19, 2016 2:05 pm

Lloyd Vanheim

Lloyd Vanheim
Alright, I'll be grading your app...

I think that it's pretty well done, but there may be a problem about your semblance, Gravity falls under Reality manipulation, which means it's banned, you'll have to find something else for your semblance, sorry about that.

5Kozai Halcarax  Empty Re: Kozai Halcarax Thu May 19, 2016 7:00 pm

Kozai

Kozai
Edited.

6Kozai Halcarax  Empty Re: Kozai Halcarax Thu May 19, 2016 10:19 pm

Lloyd Vanheim

Lloyd Vanheim
I see that now you are going for a teleportation semblance, which is allowed, but you need to change some things.

Reducing the distance that you teleport someone is fine, but you can't simply teleport them and you'd need to teleport along with them. As for your distance in general, 5AU is waaaaaaaaaaaaaay too much. The rules for teleportation is 10m max with a line of sight, 10 aura per teleportation.

7Kozai Halcarax  Empty Re: Kozai Halcarax Fri May 20, 2016 6:03 pm

Kozai

Kozai
Edited.

8Kozai Halcarax  Empty Re: Kozai Halcarax Fri May 20, 2016 6:11 pm

Lloyd Vanheim

Lloyd Vanheim
Alright, everything seems in order...

...approved ^^

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