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1Sky Richardson Empty Sky Richardson Tue Aug 11, 2015 7:27 pm

Sky Richardson

Sky Richardson
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Basic info
Name: Sky Richardson
Age: 19
Birthday: 2/27
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Height:5'8
Weight:180 lbs
Face Claim: https://2img.net/u/3311/21/08/92/avatars/463-14.png

Stats
STR:3
DEF:3
RES:3
SPT:3
Aura 200|100 HP

Personality
Group:Warriors
Likes: Stormy weather,a challenge, reading/writing
Dislikes: boredom, people who nag or are condescending, being manipulated, Grimm
Fears: Spiders, being useless, the color orange
Overall Personality:The first thing to know about Sky is that he's really smart, and he's unmotivated. At first glance(and, indeed, many further glances) he appears lazy, but he has almost no drive. The three things that serve best to motivate him are when he is having fun, when something needs to be done, and he's the only one that can do it, or when someone-anyone, really- is in danger. He is fond of sarcastic wisecracks, when the opportunity presents itself, and he is somewhat of a goofball, but he is loyal to his friends and honorable to a fault. He is quick with a smile, but a closer look at his eyes might just reveal a hint of deep sadness.

Abilities
Aura type: Recovery
Aura Color: Sky blue
Semblance: Electrokinesis. Sky is able to generate electricity by thinking about it. Unaided, he can produce enough electricity to give a someone a mild shock, though he has to be touching them. But when you toss metal into the equation, the game changes. By channeling the electricity off of a conductor(typically metal) the charge increases tenfold, as does his control over it, allowing him to 'shoot' electricity and moderately control it within ten paces. As a side effect of his Semblance, electricity has a very weak affect on him. A charge great enough to kill a man will only be mildly uncomfortable. However, this natural affinity for electricity means that Earth based moves deal him double the damage, if they hit him that is.


Item 1: Sky Dual Wields two blades he fashioned himself, Wind and Rain. Both blades are identical in all but aesthetics. Rain's blade is a blue so deep as to appear black, until the light strikes it, where the reflecting light seems to make the blade ripple and gleam a bright blue. It's hilt is the same blue black metal as the blade, shaped into a dragons head clutching a raindrop shaped sapphire in its teeth. Wind's blade is plain steel, unremarkable save for its craftsmanship and the stylized etchings that run across the blade, gusts and flurries of wind, and its hilt is a silvery white dragon clutching a typically cut diamond in its teeth. The blades are single edged, with thick spines and a flexible iron core. Both are slightly curving for more cutting surface.


Item 2: His armor consists of a steel breastplate, vambraces, greaves and elbow and knee pads. The breastplate is dominated by a large stormcloud, spewing droves of rain and forks of lightning. The rest are plain steel.
Miscellaneous
Appearance:Sky has short, wind tousled brown hair that gleams red when the sunlight hits it just so. His eyes are a light blue, the color of a summer sky. Sky's usual style of dress is a breastplate over a thick shirt, loose pants that enable a full range of motion, and, of course, his sword belt around his waist for a cross draw, Wind on his right hip and Rain on his left, as well as a pair of black boots.


Other Information: His time spent training with Wind and Rain has deprived him of training with very many other weapons, so he is limited to his swords, an unarmed fighting style that he created (Sky kwon do), and he's not the worst archer ever. He is very agile, and he has great endurance, able to pace himself very easily. But his greatest weapon is his power of perception when paired with his physical prowess. He is able to tell which way someone will move by the look in their eyes, a shift in bodyweight.
History and Sample
History:

RP Sample:

Will update when able.[/b]



Last edited by Sno Lagu on Mon Aug 17, 2015 2:34 pm; edited 11 times in total (Reason for editing : misc, history, rp sample, grammar)

2Sky Richardson Empty Re: Sky Richardson Tue Aug 11, 2015 7:30 pm

Sky Richardson

Sky Richardson
Disregard that first Miscellaneous...it was errantly posted(I hate my phone...)

3Sky Richardson Empty Re: Sky Richardson Thu Aug 13, 2015 11:19 pm

Sky Richardson

Sky Richardson
Bump for history edit.

4Sky Richardson Empty Re: Sky Richardson Sun Aug 16, 2015 10:30 pm

Sky Richardson

Sky Richardson
Bump for Rp sample! That's all fields filled out, let me know if i need to add/change anything.

5Sky Richardson Empty Re: Sky Richardson Mon Aug 17, 2015 12:29 am

Sno Lagu

Sno Lagu
Okay I guess that means you want this to be graded! So I will be grading your character today!
Now on to the grading!

#1 You don't have a face claim? Do you not know what a face claim is? Well a face claim or an FC is basically your character and what your character looks like for example my character image the FC for it is Utauloid Sekka Yufu. There was a
Code:
[img]Your FC Here[/img]
 type of thing at the top of the code for the character application that is where you put an image link of your face claim. Also please take an image of your FC and make it your profile image. Then in the image that says Face Claim: You would put what your character is or if you have drawn it yourself say you drew it yourself and include a link to the image you drew that way we can add it to the Face Claim List

#2 Explain to me is your armor a whole suit? (We only allow whole suits of armor)

#2 In your semblance description you spelled conductor and semblance wrong (Not really an issue just a pet peeve of mine)

#3 We will let you have the weakened electrical damage in your semblance if you agree that earth damage is doubled  

#4 This more of a suggestion can you make your history broken into paragraphs that way it is a bit easier to read (This goes for your RP Sample too)

6Sky Richardson Empty Re: Sky Richardson Mon Aug 17, 2015 11:45 am

Sky Richardson

Sky Richardson
1 I know what a face claim is(kinda self explanatory, haha) I left that field blank because the face I envision Sky to have belongs to no show or movie, it is from a picture I found on a roleplaying site. I made this pictury avatar (can you guys see it? Doesn't load on my end) so i didn't think i needed to FC it, since it is so obscure. I will change this if need be.
2: No, his armor is like Jaune's, disjointed pieces of armor, though you can tell they are part of a set. Is this going to be a problem?(the breastplate is a prominent piece, the storm cloud that it shows is his Symbol, Like Ruby's rose or Weiss' snowflake)
3: Fixed, along with some other grammatical errors.
4: Accepted and added to Semblance description.
5: Oh, right, forgot about this one. On it now.

7Sky Richardson Empty Re: Sky Richardson Mon Aug 17, 2015 11:53 am

Sky Richardson

Sky Richardson
Paragraphs added. Also, took 50 HP and put it in Aura.

8Sky Richardson Empty Re: Sky Richardson Mon Aug 17, 2015 1:28 pm

Sky Richardson

Sky Richardson
I can't figure out how to get th link to show up in the
Sky Richardson Pic here
code.

9Sky Richardson Empty Re: Sky Richardson Mon Aug 17, 2015 1:46 pm

Sky Richardson

Sky Richardson
Got it! Now, back to tinkering with my avatar...
ETA: Ugh!!! I can't link the image to the top... The link only works for about a minute then you get denied access to view that page, as well as a 404 error... Same reason why my avatar won't link, unless I use a screenshot(can't save pic, too little storage on my phone)

10Sky Richardson Empty Re: Sky Richardson Mon Aug 17, 2015 2:41 pm

Sno Lagu

Sno Lagu
I fixed the image and changed the FC link you had when I tried to use the link you had it said that it was a forbidden link which would explain why it didn't work. Also I did go though and fix some spelling errors that you missed. Also from the talk that I have had with Leena before I am under the impression that we only allow full suits of armor.

11Sky Richardson Empty Re: Sky Richardson Mon Aug 17, 2015 3:46 pm

Sky Richardson

Sky Richardson
Do you know why it is that you guys only allow full sets of armor? I'm afraid that I don't see why such a stipulation would be necessary. Also, would you mind double checking with Leena on this? If I have no other option I'll strike it but it is central to Sky, I really don't see what else he would wear, haha...
Eta: Also, thanks for adding those pictures, it didn't even occur to me to try and use the screen shot here

12Sky Richardson Empty Re: Sky Richardson Mon Aug 17, 2015 4:49 pm

Sno Lagu

Sno Lagu
Wait... I read that wrong I think lol sorry I fucked up its fine.. I am just going to do this now.. Yeah just ignore the crazy mod an whatever she may say.

Sky Richardson Sno_Approved

13Sky Richardson Empty Re: Sky Richardson Mon Aug 17, 2015 4:54 pm

Sky Richardson

Sky Richardson
Oh. Phew(swipes hand across forehead). Thanks for guiding me through the process! Now, to find an active thread...

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