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1Luka Valentine (finished) Empty Luka Valentine (finished) Fri Feb 21, 2014 5:00 am

Jun Lockhart

Jun Lockhart
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Luka Valentine (finished) 6byi

Name: Luka Valentine
Age: 25
Birthday: 11/11
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Height: 6 feet even
Weight: 130lbs
Face Claim: Urada Oikawa - Seikon no Qwaser

Stats
STR: 3
AGT: 3
SPD: 3
SPT: 3
Aura 150|150 HP

Personality
Group: Teacher
Likes:

  • Helping others (both human and Faunus)
  • Cute bras/panties
  • Bi/Lesbian women like herself
  • Sweets
  • Being the school nurse
  • Singing

Dislikes:

  • People (and Faunus) being hurt
  • Not having something (or someone) to cuddle at night
  • Grimms
  • Having her bras/panties ruined

Fears:

  • Being unable to help others
  • Losing her position as nurse
  • Being beaten by a Grimm

Overall Personality: Luka’s personality has changed quite a bit since she first attended Syne Academy but in many ways remains the same. To start she is generally a warm hearted and kind person making her great for the position of school nurse. She’s polite and at times soft spoken but is a very fun loving and happy person. However her years as a student fighting Grimm has made her a tough and powerful huntress and that’s become a noticeable aspect of her personality. As a teacher this comes in handy as even though she attempts to make her classes fun and entertaining it allows her to show her students how she doesn’t tolerate problems or wild behaviors with just a glance.


Abilities
Aura type: Healing
Aura Color: Silver
Semblance: Allows Luka to transfer her aura. This is usually used to transfer her aura into others as a way of "quick healing" them in the field. This takes 30 points of Luka's aura and adds an extra 20 points to her target's aura.
Item 1: (Weapon) A scythe with a 6 foot staff and a 5 foot blade. The special trick of the scythe is that it uses batteries installed in the upper and lower portions of the staff to generate a large energy blade over the scythe's blade. This blade actually extends the reach of the scythe's blade and acts as one giant edge.
Item 2: (Dust) Level 1 Water

History and Sample
History:
RP Sample:



Last edited by Arisa on Mon Dec 01, 2014 6:35 pm; edited 4 times in total

2Luka Valentine (finished) Empty Re: Luka Valentine (finished) Fri Feb 21, 2014 5:20 am

Eliara Caithe

Eliara Caithe
Luka Valentine (finished) IbyLY2eSVixTkG

Moderator Eli here to look over your App today!

Semblance: You don't have to find the parts to make stuff with your semblance, as it is using your own aura to fuel it's abilities. Unless that ability is matter conversion or something like that. If you are converting matter, you might want to state what the components can be. Also, the upgrades only beef up peoples weapons to add half of your current corresponding weapon or shield's level to theirs. (For balancing and stating's sake) So for example, you have a tier 3 weapon when you upgrade another person's weapon you'll give them +10 aura damage for their weapon.

Scythe: The witch hunter attack that you are using cannot use Aura to power it, as that would be related to a Semblance type attack. If you want it to be an Aura related attack you gotta find a way to relate it to your semblance. Otherwise you will have to find a way to either give it a different power source, or scrap it. Also the damage values for this attack should be the same as the damage values for the weapon normally if not semblance related, but it would make sense for it to extend the scythe's attack range. ; )

Bump once you have made the necessary changes.

3Luka Valentine (finished) Empty Re: Luka Valentine (finished) Fri Feb 21, 2014 6:24 pm

Jun Lockhart

Jun Lockhart
*bumps up the jam*

4Luka Valentine (finished) Empty Re: Luka Valentine (finished) Fri Feb 21, 2014 6:36 pm

Eliara Caithe

Eliara Caithe
Luka Valentine (finished) Eli_ap11

5Luka Valentine (finished) Empty Re: Luka Valentine (finished) Sun Nov 30, 2014 3:33 pm

Jun Lockhart

Jun Lockhart
Bumping this cause changes were made and it's now complete

6Luka Valentine (finished) Empty Re: Luka Valentine (finished) Mon Dec 01, 2014 5:09 am

Revan Winterstone

Revan Winterstone
Just a couple of things, I didn't see which group you were in the proper location, and though it was stated elsewhere I would like you to add it for later reference.

Secondly Your semblance requires the calculation of 25% of your aura and that get's into decimals and that's no fun. I would just change it to cost the same as a healing aura 30 aura for 20 recovered. This way it would also be cheaper than it would previously.

Bump once the proper changes are made.

7Luka Valentine (finished) Empty Re: Luka Valentine (finished) Mon Dec 01, 2014 6:36 pm

Jun Lockhart

Jun Lockhart
Bumping for fixes

8Luka Valentine (finished) Empty Re: Luka Valentine (finished) Tue Dec 02, 2014 7:44 am

Revan Winterstone

Revan Winterstone
One last thing once you are approved I will have Leena change your username to Luka Valentine, and you will use that name to log in once the change is made.

Otherwise well done. Approved!
Luka Valentine (finished) Seal_of_approval_by_magnaen-d5oa99s

9Luka Valentine (finished) Empty Re: Luka Valentine (finished) Sun Jun 21, 2015 11:04 pm

Eliara Caithe

Eliara Caithe
THIS CHARACTER HAS BEEN REMOVED AND ARCHIVED UPON PLAYER'S REQUEST!

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