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Tomoe Kisaragi

Tomoe Kisaragi
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Basic info
Name: Tomoe Kisaragi
Age: 16
Birthday: 2/13
Gender: Female
Race: Faunus
Height:5'6"
Weight: 125lbs
Face Claim:Tomoe, Criminal Girls Invite Only

Stats
STR:5
DEF:2
RES:2
SPT:3
Aura 200|100 HP

Personality
Group:Extremists
Likes:

  • Attention
  • Hot Springs
  • Sewing

Dislikes:

  • Ignorance
  • Bullying
  • Taken Advantage of

Fears:

  • Abandonment
  • Ignored
  • Spiders

Overall Personality: Tomoe Kisaragi gentle girl who unknowingly charms everyone around her with her sweet demeanor and personality. Tomoe is clumsy and a airhead at times, but through all that her mother like speaking and her level headed attitude is what attracts many to her. Like a moth to a flame. Like a flame, she can also burn those who think that they can use her to their profit. Although she seem easily taken advantage of, she has her own kind of playfulness to her personality. A playfulness akin to a tiger playing with her prey. Self-training in swordsmanship, but always used as a last resort. Words instead of swords drawn is her first action.

Abilities
Aura type: Power
Aura Color: Purple
Semblance: Wind. With the power of wind, Tomoe can do a multiple of things. By enveloping herself she can decrease/increase the wind resistance around herself. While enveloping her weapon, she can make the weapon reach further of 5 inches , increases the ease of slicing through the air, even increasing the sharpness of her weapon.

Item 1: Weapon: Katana with a sheath.The Katana itself is a collapsible blade of 27 inches.

Item 2: Dust: Wind Tier One

History and Sample
History:
RP Sample:



Last edited by Tomoe Kisaragi on Tue Mar 24, 2015 10:57 pm; edited 4 times in total

2Tomoe Kisaragi Complete~ Empty Re: Tomoe Kisaragi Complete~ Wed Mar 18, 2015 8:55 pm

Eliara Caithe

Eliara Caithe
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Admin Eli here! Let's have a look at that app of yours~!

Semblances are rather specialized abilities and therefore are limited to one kind of function. It cannot be a buff and an attack semblance, it's one or the other. Also a buff semblance can only buff one of your stats (STR, DEF, RES, and SPT), it cannot buff speed. Also a little more description on what it does would be nice. How does the wind help you. Do you take it inside you, does it swirl around you, what color is it?

I need a little more description on your weapon. Weapons are as unique and varied as the individuals that wield them. What makes your Katana special? What does it look like? Does it have any extra abilities to it?



Bump when finished making your changes~!

3Tomoe Kisaragi Complete~ Empty Re: Tomoe Kisaragi Complete~ Wed Mar 18, 2015 9:11 pm

Eliara Caithe

Eliara Caithe
EDIT:

"Just fix the buff on your semblance for now and describe it a bit more and we'll work from there, still not completely sure on the "Semblances can be only one kind of function."

4Tomoe Kisaragi Complete~ Empty Re: Tomoe Kisaragi Complete~ Wed Mar 18, 2015 9:25 pm

Tomoe Kisaragi

Tomoe Kisaragi
Like this? and BUMPS~

5Tomoe Kisaragi Complete~ Empty Re: Tomoe Kisaragi Complete~ Wed Mar 18, 2015 9:44 pm

Eliara Caithe

Eliara Caithe
Semblance: Speed is no longer a stat, if you wanna buff yourself it needs to be one of your four stats. (STR, DEF, RES, and SPT)

Weapon: You start off with a tier one weapon with one form, until you upgrade it later it can only be a sword or a rifle. Not both, you can get both later once you've upgraded your weapon after your char is approved! ^.^


Bump when edited~

6Tomoe Kisaragi Complete~ Empty Re: Tomoe Kisaragi Complete~ Tue Mar 24, 2015 11:25 am

Tomoe Kisaragi

Tomoe Kisaragi
BUmp BUmp in the the Dark?

7Tomoe Kisaragi Complete~ Empty Re: Tomoe Kisaragi Complete~ Tue Mar 24, 2015 7:40 pm

Eliara Caithe

Eliara Caithe
One last thing I just realized you need to do, sorry for not telling you earlier! : (

Semblance: I need a range for your weapon extension, how far can the wind extend your blade? I recommend keeping it at a reasonable distance, not something silly like 10 meters (33 feet)

This should be the final thing I need you to do and then you're approved!

8Tomoe Kisaragi Complete~ Empty Re: Tomoe Kisaragi Complete~ Tue Mar 24, 2015 10:58 pm

Tomoe Kisaragi

Tomoe Kisaragi
Bump-Bump~

9Tomoe Kisaragi Complete~ Empty Re: Tomoe Kisaragi Complete~ Wed Mar 25, 2015 7:01 pm

Eliara Caithe

Eliara Caithe
Tomoe Kisaragi Complete~ Eli_ap13

10Tomoe Kisaragi Complete~ Empty Re: Tomoe Kisaragi Complete~ Wed Mar 25, 2015 9:37 pm

Oliver Balcross

Oliver Balcross
Before any final approvements are made. Because this is a mandatory thing.

What makes Tomoe a faunus?

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