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1Rai Qing Long (Needs Approval) Empty Rai Qing Long (Needs Approval) Mon Aug 22, 2016 6:32 pm

Rai Qing Long

Rai Qing Long
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Basic info
Name: Rai Qing Long
Age: 19
Birthday: May 24
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Height: 6'3''
Weight: 154 lbs
Face Claim: Koujaku; DRAMAtical Murder
Quote: "Warriors will always fear death, no matter how strong they are, or how experienced they are, or even how brave they are. When they take the life of another, they must always live is the burden of that death for the rest of their lives."

Stats
STR:3
DEF:3
RES:2
SPT:4
Aura 130|170 HP

Personality
Major: Combat
Likes: ANY kind of Seafood, Peace and Quiet, and tea
Dislikes: People who are obnoxiously loud, Anyone who has no honor in battle, and guns
Fears: Seeing his comrades dying before his eyes, His strength is insufficient, and airships.
Overall Personality: Rai has a rather... blunt personality, as he does not know much about customs in the modern world. Due to the fact that he was pretty much isolated from the modern world for most of his life, he does not understand any mannerisms others may have, and takes any attempted jokes very seriously. However, he does like to meet new people constantly, and does warm up to those who he hangs out with a lot. He likes to sight see and experience new sensations constantly, and follows the "way of the samurai" very seriously. He ABSOLUTELY loathes any people who have no morals, and is very prone to anger whenever his friends are insulted. Whenever he fights in battle, Rai has no concept of holding back, and tends to get lost in the heat of intense battles, but manages to snap himself out of it once a battle ends. He tends to be straightforward, and has no qualms about killing in order to defend his friends and family.

Abilities
Aura type: Recovery; "Phantasm": Whenever it activates, an Azure Chinese Dragon will materialize and circle around Rai, before facing the direction he is facing and roaring.
Aura Color: Sky-Blue
Semblance: Chi-Manipulation: Rai has a healing ability to manipulate his own Aura to feed his teammate's Aura, while healing them in the process. (20 HP/Aura for 30 Aura. Amount varies based off of Aura amount used.)

He can also utilize this on himself with a much greater effect, healing his own wounds, and raising one of his stats. (20 HP for 30 Aura. Amount varies based off of Aura amount used.) (Buff +2 to stat for 10 Aura per post active.)

Rai can also use an alternate ability to damage his opponents, sending out the "Phantasm" of a dragon to deal physical damage, on his opponent. (Damage 20 True Damage at cost of 20 Aura. Damage varies based off of Aura amount paid.)

Unfortunately, this ability has it's own faults as well. The healing ability itself can ONLY be used on one person at a time, and if Rai is attacking with the damage variation, then he cannot assist anyone else until the attack is finished.

Also, it should be noted that the target of his Semblance will be quite obvious, as the Azure dragon surrounding him will target whichever person he is trying to affect.
(I don't trust myself to put in a designated cost, so if possible, can you help me with this? I'm afraid I might make this ability too OP.)
Item 1: A Single-bladed Steel Tachi, with no special abilities whatsoever.
Item 2: First Tier dust: Wind

History and Sample
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RP Sample:



Last edited by Rai Qing Long on Thu Sep 01, 2016 7:45 pm; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : Changing Aura Cost)

2Rai Qing Long (Needs Approval) Empty Re: Rai Qing Long (Needs Approval) Mon Aug 22, 2016 11:17 pm

Lloyd Vanheim

Lloyd Vanheim
Hi Rai, I'll be grading your app ^^

So there's just a couple things you need to chnage and you'll be good to go

First, you got one too many point in your stats, you should be at 12 and you're at 13

Second, about your semblance, please add in () the type corresponding with the use for it along with the cost, like for when you heal an ally, just add (Healing, 20 HP/Aura at the cost of 20 Aura) or if you throw your dragon to attack (Damage 20 True Damage at the cost of 20 Aura). For Buffs it would be (Buff, +2 to stat at the cost of 10 Aura per post active)

Bump when ready ^^

3Rai Qing Long (Needs Approval) Empty Re: Rai Qing Long (Needs Approval) Tue Aug 23, 2016 3:01 pm

Lloyd Vanheim

Lloyd Vanheim
Everything's good, approved ^^

4Rai Qing Long (Needs Approval) Empty Re: Rai Qing Long (Needs Approval) Tue Aug 30, 2016 2:38 pm

Lloyd Vanheim

Lloyd Vanheim
App moved in order to make some correction, I am at fault here, sorry >.<

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