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1Leon Kingston Empty Leon Kingston Tue Jul 18, 2017 5:34 pm

Leon Kingston

Leon Kingston
[note: need name change to "Leon Kingston" and speed change to "average"]

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Basic info
Name: Leon Kingston
Age: 18
Birthday: August 8th
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Height: 6 ft 1 in
Weight: 220 lb
Face Claim: Johnny Sfondi from Guilty Gear series

  Stats
  STR: 5
  DEF: 3
  RES: 3
  SPT: 1
  Aura 100|200 HP

Personality
Major: Combat
Likes:

  • Impressing the ladies of Syne Academy.
  • Dueling other students.
  • Hands-on experience

Dislikes:

  • Buzz Kills
  • Studying via books and lectures.
  • And of course, Grimm.

Fears:

  • Losing what's left of his family--his younger sister.
  • Losing his own identity trying to remain on good terms with his best friend--a Faunus and member of the White Fang.
  • Failing out of Syne academy

Talent: Social Interaction/Speech/Charisma
Weakness: Tactician

Overall Personality:

Abilities
Aura type: Recovery
Aura Color: Goldenrod
Semblance: Nemean Soul - Leon's semblance closely mimics that of the Nemean Lion from ancient mythology in that he becomes more resistant to physical damage (including self-inflicted tears to his muscular tissue by overexerting himself) as long as he manages his aura properly. When actively using his Semblance, Leon's musculature glows the same color as his Aura, with its intensity being proportional to the amount of effort required to perform the task at hand. Usage involves:

  • (Buff - Self, Strength) - Empowering attacks with melee weapons.
  • (Buff - Self, Defense) - Preparing himself to better endure a physical attack.
  • (Buff - Self, Speed) - Enhancing his reflexes so that he can attack more frequently.
  • (Healing - Self) - Forcing existing tears to his muscular tissue to repair themselves more rapidly.

Item 1: Nemean Claws (Rating 1 Weapon) - A pair of retractable claw-like katars attached to elbow-length gauntlets.

Item 2: Semblance Manifestation -- Nemean Hide (Rating 1 Physical Armor) - Leon has manifested his semblance into a more permanent, yet substantially weaker form to provide better protection against physical attacks all over his body. More often than not this manifestation is easily misconstrued as him simply being 'thick skinned'; only the most dire of potential wounds reveal the manifestation (usually in the form of faint goldenrod hue appearing momentarily at the site of the injury).

History and Sample
History:
RP Sample:



Last edited by Dmitri Markovich on Thu Jul 20, 2017 6:43 pm; edited 3 times in total

2Leon Kingston Empty Re: Leon Kingston Wed Jul 19, 2017 12:54 pm

Richard Lionheart

Richard Lionheart
Okay, I see one minor thing but there's onne aespect that I don't quite know whether it'd be approved or not so I'm waitin on another staff member's opinion ^^

The thing to be fixed is just some of the wording in the semblance, using the term "Nigh impervious" when it's actually just a two point buff partly. But mostly it's that you've gotta explain all aspects of the usage if there are more seeing as it's a touch sparse for explanation on how the semblance actually works, I would also recomend including any aestectic changes semblance activation causes ^^ It's a really cool basis for a semblance though

3Leon Kingston Empty Re: Leon Kingston Thu Jul 20, 2017 11:37 am

Richard Lionheart

Richard Lionheart
I've had it confirmed that you need more detail on the armour but yes it being what it is is fine ^^

4Leon Kingston Empty Re: Leon Kingston Thu Jul 20, 2017 1:24 pm

Leon Kingston

Leon Kingston
Anything else (including further details on Aura, Semblance, and starting Items)?

5Leon Kingston Empty Re: Leon Kingston Thu Jul 20, 2017 1:33 pm

Richard Lionheart

Richard Lionheart
Only things I can see now are again, if the semblance when fully activated and not just the natural defence in the form of armour, there is any change or even if the gold shines brighter at the sight of empowerment you should state that and you do still have the word primary there which I recommend getting rid of.

Other than that just stating the armour type on the armour (physical or dust resistant) and that it covers full body (assuming it does by wording but to confirm) and you're good ^^ Bump when done

6Leon Kingston Empty Re: Leon Kingston Thu Jul 20, 2017 6:43 pm

Leon Kingston

Leon Kingston
^_^ fixed

7Leon Kingston Empty Re: Leon Kingston Thu Jul 20, 2017 8:08 pm

Richard Lionheart

Richard Lionheart
Approved, when we're both in the discord I'll do the name change ^^

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