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1Hannah Blikdase (Done) Empty Hannah Blikdase (Done) Fri Jan 27, 2017 10:26 am

Ausslaugand

Ausslaugand
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Hannah Blikdase (Done) Hannah_van_blikdase_andersen__off_duty_attire__by_krazykaiser-dau4wv1
(Note: The following picture is Hannah in her casual/secondary attire.)

Basic info
Name: Hannah Van Blikdase Andersen
Age: 18
Birthday: 2nd October
Gender: Female
Race: Faunus
Height: 170cm
Weight: 64kg
Face Claim: N/A (Custom)
Character Design:

Stats
STR:3
DEF:4
RES:1
SPT:4
Aura 200|100 HP

Personality
Major: Combat Major
Likes: Militarism | Winter | Guns | Music (Classical & Instrumental)
Dislikes: Summer | Arrogance | Narcissism | Alcoholics  
Fears: Potophobia | Belonephobia | Gamophobia | Parasitophobia | Pediculophobia | Pharmacophobia
Talent: Fighting
Weakness: Computer Wizard
Overall Personality:
Basic Psyche:

Abilities
Aura Type: Healing
Aura Color: Silver
Semblance:
Semblance Details:
Item 1: Trofastegin
Weapon Details:
Item 2: E-Tool
Weapon Details:

History and Sample
History:
RP Sample:

2Hannah Blikdase (Done) Empty Re: Hannah Blikdase (Done) Sun Feb 05, 2017 5:41 am

Richard Lionheart

Richard Lionheart
Hey, welcome to the site. Really sorry about the delay on this, this is a good app but there are a couple little intricacies and problems that need sorted ^^

While you could make a soldier like clone as your semblance, the number of them and how they have work do not align with how you have described in your semblance. They would work according to the summon rules in their section on the semblances page of the rules, meaning that you must set stats for them and they would not cost a percentage of aura but a singular amount. You would also only be capable of summoning one soldier at a time, though by the summon rules it's damage output would ignore defenses of people. Read into the summon semblance rules and make you mind up if you want to stick to this ^^

Second are your items, in terms of the multi tool that is not what would be taken as an item here. These item slots are intended exclusively for dust, armour and weapon. Not personal belongings, though you have classed it kind of as a weapon in it's description? Either way you are only allowed to start with one weapon.

Second of all on the gun, unfortunately as the bayonet could be used as a completely alternate form of attack it would technically come under the likes of a second form. An example of this is how Ruby's own sniper functions as a sniper when the scythe blade is fully out, this would also be classed as a second form function for the same reason.

There may be a couple other small things with the app, and if there are I will keep you posted. BUmp when done this stuff ^^

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