Mirai Altos- complete?

Basic info
Name: Mirai Altos
Age: 18
Birthday: 7/8
Gender: female
Race:Human
Height: 5'4''
Weight: 110 lbs
Face Claim: V4 Flower-Vocaloid

Stats
STR:2
DEF:4
RES:4
SPT:2
Aura 150|150 HP

Personality
Group: Researchers
Likes: Sweets, animals and plants,
Dislikes: Working, bugs, and Grimms
Fears: Spiders, heights, public speaking
Overall Personality: Very quiet at the first couple of meeting people, but becomes more outspoken when relaxed. When she talk is very polite and tries to speak using small conversation. She does not take the initiative and want others to talk to her first. She is very optimistic at life but sometimes becomes pessimistic when it comes to fighting. Mirai tries her best to not let people down and is easily depressed when she thinks so. Although, she tends to get over bad things over quickly because she knows there's always a good and bad side to life which makes her sometimes moody.

Abilities
Aura type: Healing
Aura Color: Silver purple
Semblance: Hydrokinetic- able to manipulate water in the ground or air and uses it when attacking. Can heal to a certain extent.

Item 1:
Black Sun and Red Moon
Dual swords.
Item 2: Magic Armor cape.

History and Sample

History:

RP Sample:

Hello!

Sorry for the delay but I will be your mod for your application :)

First of all you have been waiting for a month so I will start by asking if you are still around or if we should archive your app?

If you are still wanting to join us, here are a few things that I have to ask you to correct in your application.

The HP/Aura ratio have to be multiple of 10. So in your case either 150/150 or 140/160.

Your have too much stat points. The total should be 12, but you have 14. You would have to remove 2 points somewhere.

Your aura type isn't one from the available ones in the Aura rules (or you just probably just forgot the actual name for the type ^^)
Different types are written in the Aura and Semblance rules

Your weapon, as awesome as it sound, can't be accepted. Weapons all start with only 1 form. A sword is a form, an Axe is a form. They can be dual weapon of the same type (like 2 swords, 2 pistols) but both must have the same use. At rank 3 and then at rank 5 you will be able to add additionnal forms to your weapon, like combining the weapon to make a halberd, or adding a gun form to it, those would both be new forms that you can add at rank 3 and 5 ^^

As for your second item, the Dust bullets, if you take the gun form as main weapon you can have Dust bullets no problem. Just know that Dust is bought in vials and used in various ways that the player can imagine, like putting them in bullet casings :P The item itself is the Dust not the casings ^^
If you want to start with Dust as item you get two times a vial that is good for 5 uses (one use = one post worth of attacks). After those 2 starter vials, you have to buy additionnal Dust and from there each vial is worth 1 use.

Other than that everything looks fine to me! :)

Ah, thank you for coming by. I was wondering if everyone was really busy or something. Ill fix my profile as soon as I can.

Hello again!

Glad you are still here :)

Now everything seems fine to me except a slight detail on the weapon.
Combining the swords in another form, even if that other form is a sword too, is considered 2 forms. So you would have to chose between the greatsword or the twin-swords (I'd go twin but that's me :P )

After that it'll be alright! :)

Okay. Thanks again. Will edit asap.

So I see you went with the twin swords but you kinda forgot to mention they are twin swords XD you just left it at one longer than the other, the other has a slight curve. Could be a lot of things with just that description :P
I know it's swords but for the sake of being clear, I'll ask that you mention it ^^

Oops. My bad. XD

Well, this is the last issue (I swear and I'm sorry!)

I've been made aware that the two swords must have the same shape (different color is fine).
So the fact that one of them is straight and slightly longer while the other is curved makes them two different weapons... You will have to chose between the two, either straight or curved. Officialy anyway, Twin swords are always of the same shape :P

Sorry again! ^^"

Oh, that makes sense. :)