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1Asen Mahawa [Completed] Empty Asen Mahawa [Completed] Sun Jan 03, 2016 10:48 pm

AsenRealmMahawa6

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Asen Mahawa [Completed] Final-Fantasy-Type0-Ace

Basic info
Name: Asen Mahawa
Age: 18
Birthday: 12/26
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Height: 5'7"
Weight: 125 lb
Face Claim: Ace from Final Fantasy Type 0

Stats
STR:5
DEF:2
RES:1
SPT:4
Aura 150|150 HP

Personality
Group: Extremists
Likes:
Friends
Training
Hunting

Dislikes:
Idle
Grimm
Unnecessary Destruction

Fears:
Solitude
Death
Helplessness

Overall Personality:
Asen's overall personality is practically carefree and is generally seen to be thinking positive. Anyone request a class clown? He's the guy for that role in class. Granted he doesn't pull pranks on anyone, he's more of a joking type of guy who tries to brighten everyone's day. Sure he might throw in a flirt or two at a girl if he likes them, but overall he turns the flirting into just a flirtatious joke that its somewhat hard to tell when he's not joking. Asen also has the tendency to tease his friends just to get them smile in the end.

If there's anything that bugs him the most is when someone is crying especially when its the effect of his behavior. It makes him feel bad and would try to make up for it somehow. See his intentions are mostly never bad or really evil to begin with, he doesn't wish to be rude or mean in a verbal sense that's just how he is. Some may see him as the best friend in the world to have, others may find him to be more of a nuisance than anything else. It just depends on who's associating with him honestly.

You know how most people even students for Hunters and Huntresses tend to slack around sometimes and just isn't that determined to get something done? Well, despite Asen's carefree nature he has a big amounts of determination that when he says that he's going to get something done he'll literally do everything in his power to get it done. When it comes to training, he can be sleeping or passing out from exhaustion yet his unconscious mind would still train the body by sheer willpower of his determination. Granted in his mind he would just be dreaming and therefore won't remember much. Hence is where his semblance resonates from, his immense willpower and determination to complete his goals and reach for the skies metaphorically to improve himself through effort.


Abilities
Aura type: Recovery
Aura Color: Silver Flame
Semblance:

Shadow Manipulation;
Shadow Manipulation is a semblance that takes on the shapes and forms of a variety attacks and defenses. This can range from firing off a shadow form of a bullet or even rain down a volley of shadow spears coming from the ground. At the same time it can ranged to form a shield to even a full plate shadow armor that weighs nothing yet helps prevent attacks from getting to them.

Item 1:
Name:
Arm Guards

Primary and only Form
Just iron protectors of the user's arms to prevent a blade from hacking the arm off unless its at the shoulder. Nothing special about it.

Item 2:
Name:
Trident

Primary Form:
Now when you see the name you would think that its a two handed three pronged fork right? Well that would be completely and utterly wrong. For the name is actually given to a katana of sorts that doesn't have anything special to it other than it is made out of silver that is surprisingly light yet sturdy like hard steel with the blade as keen as a chef's best cutting knife. It however doesn't possess any special abilities on using Dust or does anything special like that.

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RP Sample:



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2Asen Mahawa [Completed] Empty Re: Asen Mahawa [Completed] Sat Mar 18, 2017 4:05 am

Akui

Akui
Hey there AsenRealmMahawa6! I see your app wasn't properly responded to for a while, and I apologize about that. As a newly recruited mod, I'm getting to it now, and I see only a few changes needed.

First, we have skills now, and any new app needs one positive and one negative skill. You can select from this list here, and if a skill you want isn't listed, let us know and we can arrange something.

You need to list what your items are, even if it seems obvious. Those arm guards could just as easily be for preventing some Dust damage as they could be for melee, you never really know unless it's specified.

As for your semblance, it is a bit too much. Manipulating shadow is already kinda crazy, so having both offensive and defensive capabilities is a bit much. This needs clear limiters, like only being able to use your own shadow, or only able to generate effects from your general area.

Do these things in about seven days, and you're golden. If not, this app will be moved to the Inactive Section. Sorry about any inconveniences! ^_^

http://www.discordapp.com/#5424

3Asen Mahawa [Completed] Empty Re: Asen Mahawa [Completed] Sun Apr 09, 2017 3:56 pm

Akui

Akui
I apologize, but due to there being no changes or response in much more than the allotted time, I must move this app to the Inactive Section.

Sorry for the inconvenience.

http://www.discordapp.com/#5424

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